Sunday, November 8, 2009

problem soultion essay


Blackberry Addiction

Introduction:

Why are people addicted to Blackberry mobile phones? They have caused people to waste their time on just chatting with friends on Blackberry messenger and accessing internet programs .Addiction is a dependence on a behavior or sub-stance that a person is powerless to stop (http://www.answers.com/topic/addiction ) .This essay will discuss two problems of using Blackberry, the first problem is that almost the whole day Blackberry’s are being used, and the second problem is that it caused lots of people to lose valuable things, and will discuss and give two possible solutions for this addiction.


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The first problem that has caused lots of people to use blackberry’s the whole day is because some people think it’s easier to check emails and access internet programs wherever and whenever they want. It even helps them keeping their schedule and keeping them entertained between meetings and classes .Lets you meet new people and make more friends, and even entertain them in long distance trips. The solution for this problem is to estimate how much time they spend on using their blackberry’s, and waste this time in doing more useful things, for example ( going out ,eating, walking, and sleeping ).


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The second problem for this addiction, that it has caused lots of people to lose valuable things, like close friends for example (spending more time chatting then going out with them to the movies).It has even caused them not being close to family members, for example ( not knowing what happens at home, and how are they doing. On the other hand they won’t be close to their family as others ). In addition it effects your health , and mostly it causes eye problems which lets you focus on your blackberry screen and not knowing what’s happening around you. The solution for this problem or addiction is to switch it off at night, it lets you take enough sleep however switching it off would make people around you feel better and worthy . Lets you concentrate more on meetings and conversations .


conclusion:

To summarize, this essay has discussed two effects of the problem of Blackberry Addiction and given two solutions. The effects of this addiction are causing them stress and serious damage to mental health and the solutions are to spend more time with families and friends, and to waste your time in doing more useful hobbies.
In my opinion, people who are addicted to Blackberry should have faith in themselves more of leaving this addiction and spend more time in doing more useful things which will help them more in their daily lives and not have problems.

1 comment:

  1. This is generally a good introduction. The only thing I would change is that you do not need to add specific information - the problems - in the thesis statement.

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